Or was trying Short but cute It needs proofreading but
It S A Decent Enough Story I Will Read The s a decent enough story I will read the one Great readUniue characters Good story Not heavy like a Russian a decent enough story I will read the next one Great readUniue characters Good story Not heavy like a Russian but still some drama Uniue twist on getting a status screen I look forward to book 2 Bad Spell #check and bad editingI really like book but was displeased with the many that were misused or misspelled in the #and bad editingI really like book but was displeased with the many that were misused or misspelled in the to send it to the printer without someone reading it first. The greatest opponents a hero confronts is his own self doubt This is a LitRPG with a twist There is no VR The fantasy world is real The game mechanics are part of a uniue magical power that only the lucky few obtain If ou're not into this sort of thing maybe it's time ou give it a go There's also a fun and adventure packed story that will keep any fantasy reader engrossed right up until the end Book two in the series is planned for launch early 20. .
E playing storyThe story was fun to read the wrong words were often chosen by the author It made it slightly difficult to read It was ok but could use some polishingI enjoyed reading this book However I will point out that there are some editing issues that broke up the flow of the story The story did not feel like it had much depth to It Additionally The Way It Additionally the way it along with the editing issues made it hard to get lost in the world the auth. Trusted with a noble uest He must return to the dungeon where he came from and rescue his people from servitude to the dungeon lord Faced with untold dangers Kek is going to need allies such as a sweet muck fairy with a killer streak a deadly beautiful siren who fights best au natural and a sensual cat woman with lightning uick moves They are sure going to keep this lone kobold on his toes Throughout this uest Kek will learn the hard way that one of. .
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STORY IS INTRIGUING BUT THE FORMATIONis intriguing but the formation the party strains even my sensibilities and I have been playing TT RPGs for over 25 earsBeyond that this makes a great rough draft and once all the typos and missing words are cleaned up with a few editing runs I m sure the story will be very interesting Unfortunately in it s current state there were simply too many errors for me to look at this as #a finalized piece Rol. This downtrodden kobold finds himself with one hell of a uest Kek has spent his life #finalized piece Rol. This downtrodden kobold finds himself with one hell of a uest Kek has spent his life treated like a dog but he's only dog like in appearance You see he's a kobold who originally came from a dungeon And he's spent most of his life enslaved to a gang dungeon And he's spent most of his life enslaved to a gang exiled mercenaries hiding out in a deadly jungle When Kek gains the power to see the hidden mechanics of reality and learns to game them to expand his skills and find hidden meanings he is soon en.